In this video, BlueCat Founder and Judge Gordy Hoffman discusses properly writing action descriptions into your screenplay.  For the most part, action descriptions should be confined to the parenthetical below the character’s name, or in its own paragraph. Gordy says to not write too much detail into action descriptions because you do not want to discourage improvisation from your actors.


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