Why are you writing? When you write well, why does it make you feel good? If we are writing solely for our own benefit, what is the benefit? Writers who pursue material gains and popularity can write the same quality of scripts as writers who write to gratify their audiences, but it’s more practical to adopt a generous attitude for the long haul if your goal is to be paid to write.
How does generosity apply to writing an amazing script?
People We Love
When we personally invest ourselves
Be fearless about how you write your own life experiences, good and bad, into the characters. Don’t be afraid to let people know what you know and what you’ve seen. Avoid being guarded and stingy with the personal development of your characters and your audience will be grateful for your honesty.
Problems We Face
Writing huge problems into your story for your characters to handle creates a lot more work for the writer. If the central conflict of the story is a missing laundry basket, this is not a difficult problem for the writer to solve. It won’t tax you a bit to resolve this conflict. By establishing truly insurmountable problems for your heroes, you will likely create a giant challenge for yourself as a writer when you set out to devise a resolution.
Are you willing to give that time to your work? Doesn’t the audience appreciate a story with high stakes, where they have no idea how the conflicts will resolve themselves? Yes. Be mindful of what your audience comes to the theater for and make the sacrifice to deliver it.
The Smartest Crowd
Writers often make the mistake of working under the assumption that their audience might not be as intelligent as they actually are. If we underestimate our audience, we can write protagonists who make implausible choices and protagonists who bumble their way through the story. It’s easy to write a story if you stretch reality and hope the audience will overlook or miss the glaring lapses of logic in your script. It’s lazy and it’s not effective.
Write smart characters and even smarter antagonists that raise the stakes and tension in the audience. Follow the reason and logic of the world your audience lives in and assume their intelligence is equal to yours.
The New Story
People want to see original stories. How can a writer do this? By delivering specific details from their own lives. When we bring what we have individually experienced to the script, we write in an individual way. This unique delivery is the bedrock of a fresh script.
Why is it easier to copy movies and television shows than to write from our own experience? When we write about the experiences we’ve had watching other stories, it’s not close to home and requires very little of ourselves, aside from our memory.
When we give our own experiences, our losses, our laughter, the script becomes original and our own, but it is not easy and requires maximum and sustained effort. Share yourself in your plot and it will be like no other script, just as individual as every person is.
Why Write
What is the reason you’re writing?
If you’re writing to make money or a name for yourself, there’s still a good chance you can achieve those objectives. But when we write for our audiences to enrich their lives, the reward is considerably higher. When we think about serving the audience instead of ourselves, the key elements of a strong story are equally served.
In the end, the beloved script is the profitable one, in every sense of the word.
By: Gordy Hoffman
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Awesome, Alan! Thank you.
This is an excellent article. It’s good to be reminded what the whole purpose is in the first place as we put words upon the page and strive toward story. I love the thought and idea of being generous with our audience , and also the hard work and sacrifice it will take to do it. Thanks for a great reminder
Thanks so much, Tom!
Yes, I appreciate all the grounded suggestions to keep our stories, real in our life details, the ugly & the beautiful and most important our authentic striving toward a better life, & to write those supporting characters with love & compassion toward our plight of emotional turmoil & creative endeavor, with an intelligent lean to our audiences’ attention & interest in engaging the complexity of our narrative! Thanks!!
Thanks, Juliette! I’m glad you liked it. —Gordy
All great comments, Gordy. That article could have been entitled “The Soul of the Artist” because it gets to the heart of why artists bother to do what they do — share themselves with the world even if the world doesn’t want it.
This article was quite helpful. Lol, I have chosen a huge problem for my protagonist in a TV series of 4 seasons. I hope I can put in the time and effort to make this work. As the protagonist rises from obscurity to political power, she encounters stronger and stronger antagonists. There is one major formidable antagonist but he transforms from a resentful and sometimes subversive ally of the protagonist to a powerful leader relentlessly opposed to her. Along the way there are minor antagonists, with he first antagonist being the protagonist herself putting herself down with serious internal doubts and restrictions (the internals are expressed externally and through the craft of the actors) . I started writing screenplays as a way to focus a novel, and that is working quite well. But now I am thinking I should get serious about screenplays, rewriting the pilot and maybe writing the next 2-3 episodes and an outline of the series season by season. I can now accept that the initial screenplay drafts will have strong elements and crap elements and will need serious revision. But first they must be written.
Yes, I’m late to the party, but I want to thank you anyway. This is encouraging and inspiring.